Talk:Teleporting Fat Guy (cartoon)

Suggestions

 * The first paragraph says The first episode came out on October 19th, 2012 and ended on December 21, 2012. That would be a really long episode if that was what actually happened. Also the most recent episode has come out (as of the time of writing) on October 31st 2014. Even so the series is not over and should say "The first episode came out on October 19, 2012 and the cartoon series continues on currently" or something similar. User:Cisavik 7:57, November 2, 2014 (UTC)
 * The paragraph about Oliver should mention that he is also Robbie's pet. It does not need to mention that viewers think that he has a strange voice as thats not really a fact. it should also mention which episode it's shown that he has a fascination for cake. User:Cisavik 8:03, November 2, 2014 (UTC)
 * The Paragraph about Bart Reynolds tells the reader too much about the plot. User:Cisavik 8:09, November 2, 2014 (UTC)
 * Sheng Woo and Luigi should be combined as Sheng Woo AKA Luigi and shouldn't mention so much about the plot User:Cisavik 8:15, November 2, 2014 (UTC)
 * Reception paragraph shouldn't state that Sheng Woo's true identity is the most shocking of them all because that is a biased opinion. User:Cisavik 8:15, November 2, 2014 (UTC)
 * Opening lines should be updated to current episode User:Cisavik 8:18, November 2, 2014 (UTC)
 * Episode 21 should be listed in episodes User:Cisavik 8:19, November 2, 2014 (UTC)